crisis_control: ... It feels like it will never end. Cardio. (Gen - Mark the spot)
Another Vorkosigan piece!



This piece was a whole lot easier to write than the previous one - for one, it didn't require any research. Well, I had to pull up the exact quote about the Investigatif Federale building, if only to check the spelling, but that wasn't too difficult (a quick ctrl-F through the e-book; how I love digital copies).

The quote about the chip being the most trivial - a direct lift from Miles, in Memory. I love that line so much that I just had to put it in. The horses snuck in too. Sneaky things. (All thanks to that line from Simon in Memory - "I can stay alive on a horse, but I don't recall its being what you would call a sybaritic pleasure. More in the masochistic line." And staying alive is a pretty high bar where it comes to riding - and what better way to learn it than under fire, chasing after a tiny Miles who rides like he was born on horseback? Heck, sometimes I think I learnt how to stay alive on a horse from crazy horses who took off with me without warning.)

I wonder whether I'm getting tired of writing action and adventure - I considered (briefly) whether I needed to have other-memory-chip-guy trying to kill Simon, and the thought of writing some high powered chase with a lot of explosions was extremely off-putting. I never used to shy away from writing high powered chases with a lot of explosions - what changed?

This fic was just downright fun. Simon's mumbled a few times in the books about taking the damn chip out, and I've always wondered whether he'd actually seriously considered the possibility. Probably not.

Come to think of it, I might need a break from all these serious-bizness fics for a while. I've been writing too many of these pieces with Epic Insights and what-have-you, and I fear they're all going to sound the same very soon.

Date: 2012-01-24 10:59 am (UTC)From: [personal profile] philomytha
philomytha: airplane flying over romantic castle (Default)
I have long wanted fic about Simon learning to stay alive on a horse! And possibly Alys introducing him to the more sybaritic side of it, since riding sedately through lovely country with congenial company is somewhat more fun than having Count Piotr (surely the world's most alarming riding instructor) yelling at you about your knees ;-).

Also, I have to say, I am very glad that Simon appears to have obsessed your writing muse, because it's like you're writing all the fics I particularly want to read but didn't know until you wrote them. ♥

Date: 2012-01-24 01:21 pm (UTC)From: [personal profile] philomytha
philomytha: airplane flying over romantic castle (Default)
Oh, Piotr would put Simon on a thoroughly awkward horse, wouldn't he. Toughen 'em up is very clearly his view. And poor Simon gritting his teeth and thinking that yes, he survived basic training but that was a long time ago and damn why don't these animals just have controls? I do also have a mental image of Lady Alys (who, like any Vor lady, would have been put up on her first pony at toddler age, and habitually rides sidesaddle) watching a lesson and wincing a lot, equally sorry for Simon and the horse.

I managed to fall for Simon *before* reading the books from hedda's Harry Potter crossover fic in which he shows up and gets poisoned by Snape by accident. And then I read the series thoroughly out of order - I think I started with ACC, and then went on to Memory, then Shards and Barrayar, then the rest basically as out of order as possible, and he kept popping up and catching my attention every time. Though I don't think mine can have been the only Simon fic on the internet, because I remember finding The Councils of Despair around the time I posted Lost, and it making me want to give up in despair because I would never write anything that good. Though I did finally get over that... and it is lovely to see the fandom finally start growing, because I've been hoping it would for years.

Incidentally, if you're ever short of prompts, Lanna and I and a few other people have contrived to make [community profile] fic_promptly the only place on the internet where Vorkosigan is a megafandom...

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